A short while ago, I joined the website Helium, which is a website specifically built to help anyone become a better writer. The articles are all written and reviewed by members, and can also be compensated for, if your article meets certain criteria. Since I plan to write in some fashion on the web, I figured this was an excellent way to get some unbiased opinions on my writing.
This is a link to the first article I’ve submitted, which talks in detail about how my love for the Harry Potter series has had a positive impact on my life. It was originally submitted as an English class assignment (for which I received an A), and I thought it would be a good place to start.
EDIT: I have added a second article, which can be viewed here: